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Cosmic的文The Depths of Winter

甜蜜温馨清水。

Harry完全退出了魔法世界,以Harry Evans的身份生活在Muggle的世界里。直到有一天,他目睹了一场车祸,而被撞住院下肢瘫痪的是他的旧敌:Draco Malfoy。

作为富有同情心的Griffindor,以及出于他自己也不知道的心理(不和Malfoy一起时就做噩梦,出现幻觉,哈哈),他坚持探望Malfoy,而每次都被吼出来。最后Malfoy病危,不得不向Harry寻求帮助要求Healer的治疗。Harry各种心理斗争后回到魔法世界,找了多年未见的Healer Hermione帮忙。Hermione 治好了Malfoy的发烧等症状,却没法治疗瘫痪。于是Malfoy只好坐上轮椅。无家可归的他被Harry坚持带回家,本说好只住一晚却一待就是三周。

中间的相处部分非常的甜,Harry对Draco相当照顾,感动的Draco决定他们可以成为朋友;Darius和Myra取代了Ron和Hermione的位置成了Harry现在最好的朋友(两人也是相互暗恋)。

Harry两次被Draco无微不至没日没夜地照顾:第一次,Harry家被偷袭后,Harry为救Draco受伤住院(Draco暂住过Myra家,成了她的御用时尚评论家。);第二次,两人搬入新家后,Harry工作太辛苦病倒了,Draco在家照顾他。

至于两人的感情发展,,搬入新家后的某日Harry终于把战争的悲伤回忆吐露出来,和Draco共享,Draco则告诉了他Ron怎么被Lucius设计陷害而死,两人相互安慰。晚上Draco低声浅吟(太美了)于是Harry忍不住亲了他,于是两人就算是在一起了。。Harry和Draco都很温柔(有点太温柔了我觉得两个都是受怎么办)。。(此文的Draco相当不Slytherin,倒挺像Hufflepuff大概是被撞傻了或恋爱冲昏了头脑( ̄▽ ̄)")

比较而言,描写HD慢慢成为朋友的篇章更多(相当多,占全文69.23%),也比较合理。然后他们慢慢(自然而然地)相互爱上,,(铺垫也不少)。不过描写他们亲热的场面很少,基本只有几个温柔的吻和抚摸(Draco还瘫痪着好吗XD,不会太有反应(/▽\=))。Draco由于瘫痪造成了生活上种种不便,需要Harry的帮忙(本来以为会大有描写的哈哈(/▽\=)浴室更衣各种play),Harry有时会尴尬但是基本都是默默帮助他(所以看起来就是朋友之间的尴尬而已。。( ̄▽ ̄)")。。他们相互爱上更多是性格方面找到对方的优点~然后已经习惯了对方的陪伴~然后才发现对方长的真帅啊更爱了~

高潮部分(应该是吧,快结尾了)太戏剧性了。。。Draco突然被绑架了。。Harry带两个好友前去营救(期间还碰到了三头狗,我选择狗带)。。幕后凶手居然是Hermione,(黑化Hermione,讨厌。)原来是Hermione要为Ron复仇,想把杀害Ron的凶手(她认定是Draco)的灵魂引入Ron的身体使其复活。当然,Draco不是凶手,所以Ron没有复活,只是灵魂回来了一瞬间,告诉Hermione真相。Hermione拒绝相信Draco是无辜的,继续使用Crucio,Darius冲上去用刀刺杀了她(狗血。狗血一头)然后受了重伤,在闭上双眼前,Darius终于鼓起勇气跟Myra告白(狗血,真的狗血)。。然后对抗过程中Harry实在弱爆了我都快看不下去了:被Hermione去了魔杖之后就好像完全不会魔法一样,只会大喊大叫和目瞪口呆(虽然我看的出来,您的心灵受到严重冲击,但是您好歹是会简单无杖魔法的吧?您是怎么打败Voldie的?)。

(整个营救过程我就不明白为什么auror不来帮忙。。Harry明明去找了他们,他们也知道三人的去向。而且,为什么Harry要带两个Muggle去开展魔法救援行动?况且Harry之前从没告诉他们魔法世界的事情。就算他们是friends(作者的理由),紧急情况下把他们拉下来赶这趟浑水也显得Harry有点没头脑。。。)

然后,不是说好的Draco不被光明面相信吗?为什么大家这么积极地救他?为什么Neville突然成了主治医师(好吧不重要。圈子太小了。作者懒得编新人物),还称呼他为“Draco”,而Harry一点都不惊奇?

最后当然大家都出院了幸福美好的生活在一起~Draco坚持锻炼,慢慢康复~Harry求婚,甜蜜温馨~

又:有个人物穿插其中但我觉得不很重要:Mona。被怀疑是偷袭Draco和Harry家的凶手,在Hermione的黑暗计划揭露的时候被顺便提到了一下。前文的描写里这个女孩还是蛮可爱的,被Hermione害的太惨(黑化女神不开心。。)。

 

 

fanfiction的链接:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1728364/

作者自己的链接(亲热的场面多一点点点,不过感觉还是很清水):

http://www.cosmicuniverse.net/nw/myfics/tdw/tdw1.html

作者的summary: Four years after getting out of Hogwarts, Harry lives alone in the Muggle world. He has turned his back on the magical world – until one day, when Draco Malfoy gets into a car crash before Harry’s eyes and ends up paralysed in a wheelchair.

文章最后一段贴上来~点题的来了!求婚场面!

It was a beautiful day. 

Autumn had come and with it the trees exploded in colourful fireworks, creating a calm, cool and beautiful view. A lonely bird sang,  sounding wistful now that summer was over.

Harry Potter walked through the park slowly, feeling  anything but sad. 

On his arm, a pale hand rested.

Draco Malfoy’s steps were agonizingly slow, each movement requiring power, thought and determination. There was a crease between his brows and he bit his lip unconsciously as he moved his right foot in front of his left, his weight on both Harry and the cane in his free hand. A pearl of sweat made its way down his cheek, despite the weather being rather cool.

“Do you need to take a break?” 

Draco looked at Harry, who was watching with fascinated worry. “No,” he said, “I want to keep walking.”

It had taken months of hard training and a great deal of luck, but Harry’s promise to Draco that he would walk again had come true. Many tears had fallen down his pale cheeks; tears of frustration and anger when things didn’t go as Draco wanted them to, but also of happiness and excitement when he made progress. 

His goal was to be completely free of his wheelchair. They still had a long way to go for that; for now, it took all of Draco’s energy to walk a distance that a healthy person strode past in a couple of seconds. 

A few minutes – two or three steps – later, all of Draco’s energy reserves had been exhausted and he agreed to sit down on one of the benches. 

Harry pulled Draco closely to him and Draco happily complied, nuzzling into Harry’s shoulder. The park was almost empty for once; it was an early Wednesday afternoon and most people were working or in school.

“We are quite lucky,” said Draco, his voice quiet and content. "No jobs that we have to go to and no classes.”He looked up at Harry, smirking slightly. “Isn’t your life much better now than it was a year ago? Your new book is out, winning award upon award and being blessed by every non-homophobic critic in Britain, soon to be the world. You have no school with dumb tests and boring classes. Your friends have finally realised how well they fit together and are as we speak planning their wedding. We have opened the café so that we can eat cookies and cake and get fat at any time. You have faced your past and earned back several friends—”

“And most important of all,” Harry said,  interrupting Draco. “I have you.”

Draco flushed. Even after six months together with Harry  – six sweet, incredible, wonderful months – he still seemed to have problems understanding just how much Harry loved him. Harry intended  to spend every day of the rest of his life showing Draco. That was why he now had a small box in his pocket.

He disentangled himself from Draco, who looked up at him, confusion written all over his face.(这里让我觉得Draco太像Hufflepuff,你真的猜不出来吗Draco?)

“What is it?”

Harry didn’t answer; instead, he stood in front of Draco and dropped down on one knee. Draco’s eyes widened, grey eyes showing shock – and hope?

“You are the best thing that ever happened to me,” Harry said softly. “The most important thing of all. I quote Albert Camus when I say, ‘In the depths of winter, I  finally learned that within me lay an invincible summer’. That is you; that is what you represent to me – amazing strength, invincible  will, and incredible love. I love you more than I could ever say in words.  That is why you would make me the happiest man on the planet if you would be my husband.”

Draco stared at him for a few seconds, looking as though he tried to grasp the concept that someone – Harry! – had just asked for his hand in marriage. Then, after several long seconds with Harry’s heart hammering wildly in his chest, he broke out in a wide, rare grin, his smile lightening up the entire park. “Of course,” he breathed. “Yes, yes, I will be your husband. Of  course. Yes!”

Then he pulled Harry towards him and their lips met  in a searing kiss, filled with the promise of a wondrous future to come.

A few months later, on the one year ‘anniversary’ of Draco’s accident, Harry and Draco exchanged rings, defied fate and marked that day as the happiest of their lives.

 

 

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